Page 509 – Cleaning Service
Mar30
on March 30, 2011
at 12:02 am
Chapter: Chapter 19 - The Big Night
Characters: Brooke Lennox, Michael Welker
Well. I’m not so sure that you need any set-up for this. I am happy with how well panel 3 came out. XD
Voting Incentive!
It’s like a car wreck back in the ring! Vote to see what’s coming up on Friday!
He forgot to lock the door. Given, it’s understandable…but yeah. This won’t end well.
*checks watch* Hey look it is five minutes before Michael is kicked in his family jewels by his soon to ex-fiancee, man does the time fly lol. Well at least he can have one good image in his head before his plummets faster than Wilie E Coyote off a cliff.
Talk about a cliffhanger…
The irony..
A maid goddess? slave goddess?
Why do Brooke like to wear that, for just kissing Michael..
and Albone?
I know Brooke is a fitness model, in which panel 3 is a good example..
Brooke’s abdominal are slightly slim here, than 433? just an art comparison..
and looking at that body alone reminded me of Sabrina not Brooke.
(I know Albone gonna say this again.. Maddie isn’t a wrestler)
but love to see Maddie fought Brooke..
When it comes to naughtiness, irony is always fashionable. Take the ‘hot nurse’ costume, nurses haven’t worn those kinds of uniforms in twenty years. And wrestler or not, I bet Maddie is going to take Brooke apart. 🙂
Michael have a bad taste..
Maddie is hot, Sabrina is hot, Brenda Rua the sexiest angel, Chloe De Sade another lovely lady..
why pick Brooke? tsk tsk..
I can tell you spent a lot of time on panel 3. I wonder why…
Haha.
WTF?
… Yeah, no matter who’s opening that door, this will not end well.
That outfit, it does not so much for me as one thinks it might, knowing I have admitted I find Brooke hot. Now if certain other Angels were wearing that… Wait, what’s that, Rival Angels Commissioner Gabrielle Reni? Taking applications for the position of Assistant General Manager? Because Welker is paralyzed from the neck down and unable to do his job? Well, I lose nothing if I lose the job to somebody else… Yeah…
Somehow, I find my pity for the man is somewhat lacking…
Volley…Set…
Spike comes on the other side of the door.
2 main possibilities I can think of on the other side of the door. Sabrina, or his soon to be ex-fiance.
If it’s Sabrina…There’s still plenty of misunderstandings possible, but she’s gonna be pissed. Remind me if she knows about brooke’s illicit relationship?
If it’s Michaels fiance….
…
(gets out popcorn)
I can see the things you doing
And you think that I’m naïve
But when I get the goods on you
She’ll finally believe
She says it’s all drama
But every bubble got to pop
She’s gonna to see just what your doing
And then your finally gonna have to STOP!
Don’t think your gonna win this time
Cause you better believe I’m going to drop a dime on you
I’ll get you ya! Yeah! I’ll get you ya!
And when I do your gonna be busted!
BUSTED!
I don’t wanna put the hurt on you
But you better believe when I tell you
That I finally got the dirt on you
Cotton candy?
That is what dusters look like these days, since feathers went out of style with professionals. My guess is that Brooke raided the janitor’s closet rather than buy one at the costume shop.
Oh my frog, she’s cosplaying as Chloe de Sade’s next job! ::hurriedly fills out an application for Michael’s job:: Okay, who wants to slip this into La Commish’s inbox for me? I offer a large plate of the cookies of your choice!
Great buildup in last couple of panels. Can’t decide if this is gonna remind me of the Honeymooners or Haloween Pt 50!
Yeah he’s not being sneaky and suspicious at all. Grabs popcorn. Someone’s going to get busted. This is a fantastic balance between a driving storyline and the fight. I liked the voting incentive. It seems Sara and the ref are having words. Which is perfect to give Krystin a chance to come too. Krystin! Looks like Sara can’t stand. I wonder if Michael loses his job, or if he loses the fiance, if Brookes interest in him drops.
Hehehe, Man… I can quickly see this from being the best night of this corporate tool’s life, to the worst in just the opening of a door. Then again, who knows, Maddie might be into Brooke too and just doesn’t like Sabrina. But I doubt Mikey would be that lucky. To quote perhaps my favorite Wrestling commentator of all time… “OH MY GOD! CATFIGHT! CAAAATFIIIIGHT!!!!”
What is Michael using?
answer : Axe Provoke
even goddesses will fall
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCOw6qzgohs
helllllo nurse (as tha anamaniacs might say). i guess this is the Brooke version of the “victory party”. now since the smart money is on Maddie about to come in with Brina running a somewhat distant second i’m going to take a shot way out in left field….
It’s Chloe/Belles who have talked Brooke (and gave her some shopping tip locations) and promised her membership (from way back in the double digits episode being a goal of Brooke’s) if she could get Michael into a compromising position so they could use his pull to further get at Sabrina/protect their own positions before the PPV is at an end, since the drug testing idea didn’t seem to pan out the way they wanted.
but yeah it’s probably Maddie.
“C’Mon Sassy, you managed to tip that cow over and everyone knows cows can’t get back up on their own, so just pull your achy leg up by the ropes and get the ten count. The ref CAN count to ten can’t she? she doesn;t look that bright.”
Folks are too busy looking at Brooke… but the VI is looking to me like a possible double count-out! Come on Krys!
2O2BC, yeah it is understandable for Michael to forget to lock the door, and depending on how this turns out, he might not ever make that mistake again. (vague for extra effect!)
LOL jabberwocky! The countdown is on! Who doesn’t want to see Michael get drilled in the nads? He might be clinging to Brooke’s image for a while.
Thanks, darkmark! 🙂 I try.
Great youtube clip, MGC. Very appropriate to the update and now we know Michael’s secret. XD As for Brooke, her outfit might have something to do with Maddie being in the building, as extra incentive for Michael to be here. As for Michael lusting over Brooke…Brooke has her obvious beauty and there’s something about the guys in Rival Angels (and readers) that just love Brooke, and it’s not like Michael hasn’t tried with Sabrina and mildly with Sun. What’s the question about Brooke and page 433? I’m not sure I understand. I think I’ve said that Maddie wouldn’t challenge Brooke in the ring, but that doesn’t mean that Maddie wouldn’t fight Brooke given these circumstances. Brooke and Maddie are most definitely going to have…a confrontation.
Chris…that ol panel? Psh, took maybe a few minutes. 😉
Coel, it’s all turned on it’s head with much more to come. !!
Tarrasque…I think ‘not end well’ is a great way to sum it up, though it’d be a shame if Michael came away unscathed, wouldn’t it? It’s a wonder he’s made it this far as Gabrielle’s assistant GM.
Golden Girl, it’s completely understandable and I think just about everyone else feels the same way.
Adder, it seems that everyone, including the Upstarts know about Michael and Brooke, back from when Brooke was showing off her ‘other’ pad to Sabrina and Krystin, when Michael made a surprise visit. It didn’t really end well. I believe about page 266 might be interesting to check out. https://www.RivalAngels.com/?p=1209 But yes, it’s not a done deal that the person looking to walk in is Maddie. 😉
Snowy, I think ‘Busted,’ is a great prelude to what’s coming.
Not cotton candy, Champ, but I think that’d make a sticky situation, even more stickier. 😛
LOL Cookie Ogre! Brooke is trying to be true to the culture…that all sexy french ladies wear maid outfits. XD Or maybe she got inspiration from when Sabrina wore a similar outfit to make fun of De Sade? Ah, the applications are coming in now for Michael’s job and not a moment too soon.
Baraduin, I’m glad that your interest is being held by what’s going on! I guess we’ll all be surprised in just a few updates. 😉
Vekara, I’m glad you’re enjoying the dynamic of the storylines. 🙂 Lots on the line here, both for Brooke and Sara and for Brooke and Michael. Brooke’s interest in Michael first started off to keep her job and has evolved into…I don’t know what. It would be interesting to see if Brooke’s attention for the man changes if something like losing his job and/or his finaceé happens.
Donny, a great Joey Styles quote! A very good point about Maddie maybe joining the fun. That’d be a heck of a swerve, eh? I would think at that point that Michael would have attached a lucky horseshoe to his body surgically.
I think you could make that shot of Brooke into a background image for people’s computers. People would probably put a buck down for that.
Anyone else with me?
Ninja’d by Trevor!!
I’m glad you like the Maid Brooke picture so much. 🙂
Ninja’d by jpiv and Dyna!
jpiv, I believe that Brooke is collecting her just spoils, at least in her mind it makes sense. I love the Belles theory with Brooke and great memory too! I will say that a want of Brooke’s is to be on Hell’s Belles even though Chloe is pretty mean. And as always, it’s hard to argue with Minx. XD
Hey Dyna! Great point about a possible double count-out. We haven’t seen one of those yet in Rival Angels. 😉
I was talking about the art comparison of Brooke..
Brooke’s abdominal here is much longer than episode 433, in which her abdominal are short..
hehe
Is it? I don’t know. When I draw Brooke, I try to make sure she has big boobs and hips of a certain length with some definition in her stomach. For instance, Krystin’s hips are wider than Brooke’s, or I try to. I’ll have to check out the length comparison though.
So, is there a question in there or are you pointing out an artistic mistake? XD
maybe yes..
Brooke’s body, also bit wider in episode 433
Hmmph! I would have gone with cotton candy. But then that’s me…
*Grabs Mr Ogre’s application and dashes for the office, pausing to read as I go* “Oooo! Ahhh! I had no idea… “
::evil grin:: Don’t spill all of my secrets, Madame Champ! What kind of cookies do you want for this?
Well looks like two people are going to be screwed heh. By his wife walking in on him and Brooke. *rim shot*
oh woow brooke sweetie what are you thinking are you thathot to trot that youdont care some one couldbe walking in and not to be a pain but that was kinda your thing to do Micheal you were the last one inthe room
Very Nice Chloe costume on Brooke. 😉
as for Axe commercials, I think this one is more appropriate:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pI3JlDoqEKg
Maid Brooke is AMAZING! Wow…
Unfortunately they are about to have unwelcome company, that is not a good thing for either party involved I would imagine! Hope we get to see who it is friday!
Champ, I figured you’re sweet enough. 😉
Well done, Kurt. 😀
Comichero, she did tell him to lock the door, though she probably should’ve known by now what her wiles can do to him. It’s a recipe for disaster!
LOL Ashley! Yes, very cool. 🙂
RAWF, I know you are in good company with admiring Brooke, including Michael. Yeah, I think no matter who’s behind the door, this won’t end well for anyone involved.