Page 16
Feb04
on February 4, 2008
at 1:14 am
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Home Sweet Home
Characters: Sabrina Mancini, Susy Love
Location: Angel Dome arena
Sabrina’s pro debut, and she’s got the entrance down, despite any butterflies in her stomach. Susy Love looks like she wouldn’t mind ‘helping’ Sabrina with those butterflies. In case its not obvious, there’s 2 commentators and they have different colored word balloons.
Discussion (10) ¬
Susy looks pissed, good job on the facial expressions. Especially since you couldn’t do really detailed there without it looking weird. I really like this page actually.
I’m thrilled you dig the page Kaly. Susy’s no joke. 😀
LOVING the comic, AWESOME.
Do a girl in a beth phoenix like costume, that would look cool.
and bring in a black chick
Glad you’re enjoying the comic! I will certainly consider a Beth Phoenix-esque outfit. She’s a snazzy dresser. There is an african american gal, Krystin! She was introduced on page 9 and has been a constant throughout the series including page 15 (this being 16).
Thanks for reading!
How about two female commentators?
Right now, the plan is to keep one female and one male commentator, but we’re going to see female refs in the future.
Great rendering of the arena. Cool story so far.
Those commentators are great!
Thanks! They are a lot of fun to write for.