Chapter 02-Page 5-OverCoach
We’re back!! And it feels great to be back. Brooke might not think so though.
In part because of Brooke and Amanda’s attempt to support Krystin and help her out of her funk, Krystin has taken to taken to this mission of helping Brooke and Amanda. It might not be going as well as expected. Of course, Hell’s Belles have always been dangerous, and in no small way because of the solid unit they (usually) are.
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Voting Incentive!?
Do you guys like the Voting Incentive? It hasn’t been so hot, numbers wise lately so I’m wondering if it’s something worth continuing. What do you think?
Judging from the preview, looks like krystin didn’t really get the results she wanted. Oh well, better luck next time( if there is one).
Your hint is that she’s not getting the results she wants NOW. XD
That’s sort of the problem, Kristyn’s trying to show them how to do the moves, causing more of a distraction than a help. She’s not used to being a manager, they’re not used to having a manager, and it just isn’t really meshing
That’s a great explanation as any. Krystin’s heart is in the right place even if her mouth is getting in the way. You can understand Brooke and Amanda’s hesitation last page when Krystin asked to accompany them.
Obviously I push on the voting, it’s a free way for readers to promote you. Some webcomic folk pimp it a bit more actively, encouraging folk to click it or going a bit risque/pinup as incentives, or offering a perk if the comic hits the top XX number, top 100, top 50, top 10, etc. Not sure how to make it work for you. Certainly can make it even more prominent at the top of the page’s spread, right by your blurb, rather than the bottom (which many may not notice).
Regardless, yay, we’re back.
Thanks for always voting!
It’s not that it’s a ton of work to do, but we used to be in the 20s and now we’re like, 200-something. Granted we’re just starting up, but some of the appeal is lost when you’re that low. I’ll definitely try to spotlight it more and give it at least til March.
Krystin may mean well, but sometimes the only lesson comes from action not words. Also, it doesn’t help to try and try a move again and again until it is done right.
At this rate I wouldn’t be surprised if Krystin made a switch to the Belles side of the ring for a while given her underhanded tactics. History or not, Krystin’s actions speak for themselves.
However, Brooke is her last hope of redemption in herself and in the eyes of the others. That is if she’s willing to listen to reason.
At this rate it’s a long recovery road for Krystin in both physically and emotionally. 🙁
Well that’s right. Doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result is a definition of insanity.
But then we knew she was crazy since she thinks she can beat me 🙂
It might seem like Brooke is her last hope for redemption but…there is another. !!
Welcome to the meat grinder, Krystin.
Sigh. It feels like every time Brooke looks to be going somewhere she almost immediately gets pushed back down. Sabrina, Sun and Krystin are turning into main event stars while Brooke looks to be eternally trapped in the lower midcard fighting jobbers. It feels like there’s no hope for her.
Do I sound bitter? I always sound bitter about Brooke.
How is kat a jobber? She was in the match to become athe #1 contender for the championship(not the TV Championship) and was close to winning it.
Kat is the “pushed back down” part.
I get it, I know how you feel about liking a character and seeing them struggle. I can’t promise the struggle will be any less, but given what Brooke’s goals are (the Prologue pages of this chapter!) I can tell you that we’re going to get more of Brooke especially next chapter.
I’m sorry if I sound like I’m complaining.
Not at all. I love that you have taken interest in Brooke! And know that you are not alone in liking her or wanting to see her do well.
So, Krystin. About this “teamwork” thing… I think you’re doing it wrong.
Some peeps aren’t cut out to be coaches. She’s definitely a ‘do what I’m doing.’
Somebody clearly isn’t “the definition of coach”!
Krystin might argue that Amanda and Brooke aren’t very coachable. 😉
With friends like Krystin….
You don’t need a coach!! Inspirational quotes! Motivation!
Is Silicon and Halitosis their tag team name?! o.O Wow now that’s gutsy!
Yep, Jen just thought it up for them right now, but which is which?
Remember that they all used to be on the same team. !!
OK, of all things to happen, ‘overcoaching’ wasn’t exactly one of them. Found it funny, even at Brooke’s expense. :p
Everyone has to take a hit, some big or some small. 😛
half expected krystin to jump up on the apron and demand to be tagged in so she can show the other two how to do their moves right by the end there. “like this brooke. see?”
There wasn’t time. For sure next time.
A Katastrophe plus a splash from Jen? Now, that’s a finisher.
Wait til you see next page!
Hey, the Belles are cheating! Double teaming is against the rules!
They have a 5 count. XD
Whooooo! Hell’s Belles!
And, personally, I love the voting incentive. Vote everytime I come here.