Chapter 10-Page-4-Good Times
Nov08
on November 8, 2013
at 12:02 am
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Big Bang
Characters: Brooke Lennox, Michael Welker
Location: Rival Angels Headquarters
Brooke is standing up for Sabrina, but Brooke isn’t known for her altruism. Maybe she’s got something else up her sleeve? And it seems like they’re talking about more than just Sabrina’s job.
Voting Incentive!
Things seem to be looking up for one of them. Vote to see what’s coming up on Wednesday!
Nice characterization. Let’s see what develops.
Wow the post glitched and ended up on Tyrannus’ name instead of yours. Weird and yes I click on the right name when I started just got in a rush to post a second note.
So in the effort to be fair, Tyrannus – Yes it would be nice if Brooke got a good break.
Glad you’re digging it. 🙂
My poor Brooke, I hope things can turn around for her, that after all the bad something good happens.
Yes it is, he put a lot of what if’s in that page.
Will Brooke become Sabrina’s best friend?
Will man up and stand up to the boss?
Will they have a fling? Probably not he didn’t shut of the recording device.
These are all excellent questions and the fun will be in getting the answers. XD
There are big plans for Brooke here on out. If those plans are good or bad, well…
“That was six months ago”
Yeah, dude. Just cos she ruined one of the biggest days of your life, no reason to hold a grudge.
Sounds like a Politician with a scandal. Hey that is ancient history, six months ago for move on.
Trying to figure out Brooke’s expressions in the last two panels. Maybe. Is that. Could it be. Sincerity?
It IS a mystery, eh? XD
Haha He’s so close to the recorder I bet it over-modulates and squelches in Gab’s ear.
Looked to be a bit fancier recorder than that. They’ve gotten pretty clever at engineering that problem out these days. Still, though. Seemed awfully determined to get that statement on record clearly, didn’t he?
It’s his iPhone and he has it set to auto-load conversations to dropbox. O_o
But nice catch on his overstating his feelings. XD
I hate when people mess up my secret records of them by getting to close to the device and messing up the sound quality. Speaking of which anyone need the secret code the cameras I’ve got hidden the house?
This is a great page on a number of levels. I love it.
First, great characterization for Brooke. It doesn’t establish her thought process explicitly, but her word choice makes it seem like she’s trying to create psychological distance between herself and heel-Brooke. If I’m right, and this is part of a face turn, it’s a well-executed, believable one. Kudos.
Second, I love the shifting perspective in this scene. Something as simple as a conversation in an office, and we’re seeing it not just from several sides, but above too? Very nice. Then zooming in on the characters and ignoring the background for a couple panels as things get personal? Clever. Effective. Excellent job.
Third: “Whoa, now. There’s no problem with me and Gabrielle.” Spoken firmly and directly into the mic. Hehe.
That is important for him to say about Gabrielle now if he can just pull it off so he sounds like he means it.
I’m glad you guys liked the update. 🙂
Interesting development: nice :). I´m curious of Scuffles opinion :D.
So am I but we will have to wait a long long time until the next page.
maybe even Sammie’s!
Snowy gets up earlier than me it seems lol. Eh Brooke just finally realized that having real friends watch your back is better than having business associates do that job. Her and Sabrina could form a tag team called Ultra Goddess lol.
That would be a pretty sweet tag team name.
I don’t think friends are inherently better than business associates. Damage Inc. hasn’t proven unreliable, yet anyway. The thing is, Kat is a backstabber and after the pay per view, everybody knows it. Do you think anybody trusts her now? If she were to lose Angel or Jennifer, the stable is done, nobody is going to join up with the prospect of having a knife inserted into their backs.
If I may be honest for a minute…
I truly do believe that the experience with the Belles helped change Brooke for the better and reminded her who her true friends are in her former teammates.
I think Brooke’s trying to bring the gang back together or at least in some form of it.
Also the only one who ruined the wedding was actually Brooke for goading Sabrina into attacking her and Michael for not being honest when it was needed the most. 🙁
Still, it’s nice to see Brooke TRYING to grow up a little. Yet she maybe messing with things she may not be able to control or shouldn’t get involved in. 🙁
If you liked this page with Brooke, I’m hoping you like the next. 😉
wait when did Brooke McMahon-Helmsley show up in RA with her knowledge of what’s best for business? 🙂
i’m also sensing a clue as to Brooke’s motives here. Brooke wants revenge on the Belles for the beatdown that she’s “so totally over” now that even Michael doesn;t believe her. Who better to get as an ally then than the person who spent her first year in RA feuding with and had already hopped in to fight them off on her first appearance back in RA?
so Brooke may be thinking she can kill two birds with one stone here. 1) she helps Brina keep her job so she has an ally to fight the Belles with and 2) “hey sabrina no hard feelings about before right? did i mention i just saved your job so you can keep doing what you love here in RA?”
As usual, you come heavy with the ‘interesting’ thoughts. 😉 Brooke isn’t known for her altruism, right? Right?
Interesting thoughts indeed. “People change”, people talk and Brooke plays her own game… http://youtu.be/6_wfILc3ATg
Nice page. Dialogue rings true. I’m hoping Brooke somehow uses his to smash ‘Brina in the face with a chair, but still…
I think Brooke putting in a good word for Sabrina and them being cool with each other any time soon are two different things, so the chair thing is on the table. XD
I’d quite like to see that.
You know how Christian wouldn’t be a former world heavyweight champion and have a main event feud with Randy Orton if Edge wasn’t forced to retire? I think Brooke wants Sabrina around so that she can have the chance at facing and defeating her. Everybody thinks she’s the weak link and she wants to prove that she’s just as good as Sabrina.
Hehehe, Michael’s going to be looking over the transcripts of this conversation just to make sure he heard what he thought he heard
She’s gonna want to bring back the Upstarts again…with her as the leader, isn’t she? Yeah, there’s your master plan, Brooke.
And then, we culminate your plan with the whoopie. There will be so much whoopie!
Also, just realized, 6 months? Shouldn’t Chloe’s suspension be over?
I believe that Chloe was suspended indefinitely. At the end, Chloe wanted time off.
This one is for Chloe ha ha: hope’s she’ll be back in extreme (& clean :)) full force http://youtu.be/Xj8WUd-tbhE
People change? Does that mean you’re going to start working hard in the gym instead of using your looks to get ahead?
She did work hard, how else would she still have her job? How else would she have gained a television title opportunity?