Chapter 12-Page-6-Hail Brooke
Jun20
on June 20, 2014
at 12:02 am
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Crossing The Line
Characters: Brooke Lennox, Holly Harrington, Jake McGuilicutty, Krystin Moline, Mercy Morrison, Michelle Blacqwater, Miriam Hardy, Sabrina Mancini, Sun Wong
Location: Chicago
Well, the game is in Brooke’s hands and what if she drops the ball again? Sure there could be a tie, or sudden death, but here it is, the game on the line, can Brooke and the Upstarts pull through?
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you really VERY NICE in football game storyline Albone…
anythoughts
new comic
NFL style?
But of course NFL style, it is the easiest style to understand, plus do you really think those 8 girls could run 90 minutes non=stop?
You don’t mean to indicate soccer players run around 90 minutes non-stop surely. What about all those handy ‘grab shin and cry like it’s broken before God magically fixes it’ moments? Some of the Upstarts may be divas but they have more pride than that. ๐
If you’re selling an injury, it’s still work! You can’t just lie there and moan a bit and expect the ref’ll give you your free kick.
Don’t need a ref. I’ll give you a punt anytime xD
Ha, thanks! I don’t think I’ll be doing a football comic any time soon. All of these panels and characters are tough!
Can the girls run for 90 minutes straight? Some can, like Sun who can swim Alcatraz. She’s got good cardio.
Great time for a cliffhanger moment and right at the last play too. ๐
Man, Brooke has to catch this one and still maintain her figure. Still, it’s anyone’s game.
I predicting that Brooke will miss catching the ball with her hands but it will get stuck between her breasts and then every will scream, Goal!
That would be TOUCHDOWN. XD
Or at least second base?
*ducks
Looks like Sun and Krystin ran into each other (or were pushed) on the side with Krystin’s injured hand.
I will go with pushed
Mercy helped that little collision along.
Is that… are Brooke’s hands actually attempting to find a proper catching form? Oh wow… I think she’s going to do it!
Well given enough tries you will eventually get one. Tough if she does catch it the catch might make her head swell.
But will her eyes stay open?
Well it’s a good throw!
.. What happens if it’s a draw? Nobody wins the bet? Extra time? Fisticuffs to settle it?
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Imma pretty sure there is a stipulation that states that, in the event of a draw (or a victory achieved or defeat suffered by either side), I am immediately due a cookie from all participants.
Read the small print, my paws are everywhere.
*nod*
The event of a tie sudden death will kick in.
But I doubt Albone will do that because then he will need to make new characters for us to cheer for.
Hmmm….
Rival Kittens
What would happen in the event of a tie???
ummm sudden “death” of the upstarts would leave a vacancy. Kittens and paws and rug rats everywhere. Oh My!
Clearly, you ignore Brooke at your peril.
*nod*
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Baby ‘Brina Watch!
The older Sabrina-Ripley gets, the more talkative she gets.
Not a word of English mind you, but she is quite happy to engage with anyone and everyone in a long series of mumbles, grumbles, squeals, giggles coos.
I’m trying to decide if its good or bad that I seem to understand her.
*ponders*
Hehehe, that’s the thing about babies. The more you listen to their adorable little made-up language, the more you understand it.
It’s definitely going to be a nail biter for every single person involved, especially Brooke!
It’s a good thing you undestand the mumbles and squeals. XD
Try reading SUGAR AND SPIKE!
Whew. Originally the VI of Krystin yelling made me worry she reinjured her hand
No, it’s much worse. XD
Plot Twist: The entire game was one giant hustle so that the MMA girls would ignore Brooke in the crucial final play. She’s actually an amazing wide receiver.
Moline’s Four?
you got the “wide” part right anyway…
Now you’re catching on to Def Tech.
A pass won’t stay that long in the air. A ball punted 40 yards downfield with a hang time of 4 seconds is pretty good.
A 40 yard punt. not a 10 yard pass.
that really bothes me.
Dramatic Licence cares not for your laws of physics.
Is always the way.
it would have been just as dramatic if it happened in 2 and a half seconds.
I disagree.
TEN YARDS?? Try 45 yards. ๐ Plus, Sabrina is throwing a rainbow, she’s liable to make it rain out there.
You can see the lines on the field. Math says 15. And she’s not throwing the ball 45 yards on the move in any case.
I know most of you likely don’t know anything about football, but trust me. I like this comic, but it feels like he didn’t pay attention to the details.
The R logo is midfield. Brooke is in the endzone. It’s not rocket science.
And thanks for the shitty ‘didn’t pay attention to details’ comment right next to ‘likeing’ my comic. I feel the love and I hope you feel it too. Fans like you, who’s only comments are negative are why I do all of this. Thanks, bro.
It all comes down to this… will Brooke finally make her first (And most important) catch of the game, or will these two fierce teams take it to Sudden Death Overtime
Well, her eyes are open…
This is a good start.
*nod*
It’s a great question. !!!
You can doooo eeet, Brooke.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VZ2HcRl4wSk
Hells yes.
funny how Brooke seems more frightened about seeing a football heading her way than she has before any of her matches where bodily harm is assured. krystin it seems is less than hopeful about the outcome of the pass and if brooke drops it will blame Sabrina somehow because she always wanted to be the QB for the match and the one pass she throws is dropped.
Don’t forget Sun’s failure in this too…Def Tech has blame for everyone.
This is the moment when we find out if Brooke has butter fingers or not.
She would tell you that her fingers are beautiful, soft and fabulous. Clutch!
I get it. The heavens part and golden horns sound. The fickle finger of the god from Monty Python flicks the ball into her arms and she makes the trap. By divine intervention Brooke finally “gets it” and becomes a real wrestler and contender for the gold. By that I mean MY gold of course.
Boss you are SO mean to make us wait here. Hmmph!
Wait? But you already figured it out. XD
The VI is up for me now. I have to say wow! that’s sure an interesting situation there. Complex art and very will done!
Thanks Champ!