Chapter 3-Page-21-Make Your Move
Jul06
on July 6, 2012
at 12:02 am
Right then, Ian makes his move and now we’re getting a callback of sorts to the cover of this chapter. With that in mind, is the Chapter Cover Sabrina’s fantasy dream…or Ian’s? The title of this chapter is, ‘Forbidden Desires,’ btw.
Voting Incentive!
If you want to get a read on where this is going…I suppose you could click on the voting incentive and see what’s coming up on Monday. 😉 VOTE!
Sabrina does not look at all pleased. Interesting.
Well with his last comment I wouldln’t be pleased eiher
Hard to tell! I mean…what about the cover to this chapter? 😉
https://www.RivalAngels.com/comic/s02-c03-cover/
Oh goodness me, this is the last thing Sabrina needs. Just cause you call a woman pretty doesn’t me you can (pardon my language) Throat fuck her. Sabrina seems a bit naive when it comes to men. Not that she can’t defend herself. She just needs to learn some of Suns angry attitude she radiates. Keep up the great work. Still reading and enjoying.
I wouldn’t use such strong language to characterize stealing a kiss. If his words are sincere, then he’s just being impulsive. Generally people don’t negotiate the timing of their first kiss. Sooner or later someone makes the first move. I still can’t stand Ian, but I can’t fault him for this one.
Well he is insto his self and with good looks some faltery he might be able to get far. I can see him saying to himself she could make good arm candy.
I think every one of your comments are good, especially from the POV you’re coming from. I’m very happy to say that Monday should clear things up as to where this is going.
Yay Vekara! 🙂
His approach seems almost juvenile if it wasn’t for his age and the situation it would be borderline cute.
Cute maybe but he screams watch out to me.
He’s used to naive, young wrestling starlets falling for him.
Did you get upset when you fell?
If Mo Chen fell, I would have landed on you.
XD
Well Snow has always landed on her feet. Pretty amazing but that’s a catgirl for ya
Wow, Ian. Way to go. Smooth as Sandpaper. 🙂
Unforeseen side effect of that much Fake and Bake. The skin sort of… rebels.
Maybe he thinks the girls like it rough.
He’s smooth if she goes for it. If she doesn’t, well…
Ah, geez.
I take that to mean you didn’t like Sabrina going in for the kiss?
I know, right?!
Should’ve moved a little sooner. Five will get you ten that she’s thinking about Yoshi. He’s far less forward.
I doubt that. She is thinking hot man saying the right things and moves in then he puts his foot in his mouth.
Monday will tell the tale on where they are going from here. 😉
Snowy, Ian is saying it out loud as if, ‘yes, this IS the right thing to do.’ Reaffirming out loud what he has in his heart.
Don’t worry about yoshi, she’ll probably sleep with both of them just to be fair.
Bat him away Sabrina, as he isn’t worth it and that he’s going a bit fast. 🙁
Yes run away unless you want a one night stand then embarrasment later on.
Ooooh….will she listen? Monday will tell the tale!!
Quick suggestion, Ian. A real man (even one who wasn’t trying to hit on Sabrina) wouldn’t ask if he should talk to the guy who annoys, creeps out, and stalks BRA talent.
While I’m here… dude! At least go on a DATE first or something!
He is all real man, so much so he thinks he is the man. No one can resist him so why try to flatter when he can flaunt?
I think Acoleth above was on to something….Ian is caught up in the moment. I mean, the guy was thunderstuck at seeing Sabrina in her Black Canary outfit and he’s picking up these vibes from their conversation. Is he wrong? WE’ll find out Monday!
i think he gets the “friends” speech next update. and cross off “smooth” to Ian potential character atributes.
Maybe he uses AXE and thinks that the commericals tell the truth.
What? Are you saying AXE commercials tell lies? They’re not true?
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Dammit!
Pffft. Next they’re going to tell us that girls don’t have pillow fights.
ROFL! What’s next? Oil?
But…what about the cover? Oh yeah, we don’t know if that was Sabrina or Ian’s fantasy…Yeah, Monday should clear that up. 😉
SLAP HIM SABRINA!!!!
Yeesh. I figured he wouldn’t wait >_> impatient troll -_-
Slap him for what? She is the one that kissed him.
A slap could be coming….!
That’d be kind of excessive. Not to say that she should just let him do whatever he wants, but she can pull away and tell him that she’s not interested without getting violent.
By the way, this is why if you’re kissing somebody for the first time, you do not close your eyes. If Ian’s eyes were open, then he would see the “WTF?!” look on Sabrina’s face, realize he’d fucked up, and could stop kissing her and start apologizing. Also, when kissing somebody for the first time, you usually want to move in slow and watch the other person’s body language and such to figure out how they feel about it. If it’s obvious to you that they’d rather not, you can abort. Even if it isn’t obvious to you how they feel, it gives them plenty of time to respond positively or negatively, as opposed to being caught off-guard like this.
I’m not gonna say that I’m any kind of expert on relationships, but there are some things that even I know. These are rookie mistakes Ian is making here. How in the bluest of blue hells does he not know this stuff?
It would be excessive, especially for Sabrina. If she were to slap Ian, it would be to snap him out of something, rather than punishment, so to speak.
You bring up some really great points and it goes to show how confident he was, and how much it’d been built up in his head that this is the right thing to do. ‘Own it,’ if you get my meaning.
Of course, Sabrina might be just fine with the kiss and only surprised that it came like it did.
The thing about ambushes like this one is that even a woman who might’ve been cool with the idea with a few seconds’ notice might freak out if you surprise her this way. Of course, maybe not, but the smart move is to give her a chance to react before you make contact, however sure you are.
My phone’s browser is correctly identifying this section as a text input area and bringing up the keyboard pretty regularly now. Sweet.
After almost a week without power I’m back online and happy to catch up with Rival Angels!
And what a page I land back on…Um, yea. haha
Sabrina REALLY doesn’t seem pleased with the kiss. And in the voting incentive it almost looks like she’s trying to be calmed down from a state of shock or something.
Monday will be very interesting. The photo shoots and match clips in the previous pages were cool. Wish I would have been there for them. lol
Glad you got power back. That was quiet the storm you all had. I saw this weather report and was like dang gald I don’t live there: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tVEPvXBEOSE
Welcome back, RAWF! Glad you could make it. 🙂 Glad you enjoyed catching up and on Monday…will be interesting.
Just to let you all know, I do NOT like the look of that voting incentive….ew
Grrrr I won’t know what you are talking about until I get done posting.
Hmmmm….O_o
The look on Sabrina’s face in the VI: “You’re not supposed to use the tanning chemical on your lips. EWWWW!”
So no tan in the can on the lip got it. Do you think he over uses down below?
Well, there goes your surprise on Monday… XD
Oh my! She needs a bodice to be ripped!!
Short of that, a robe will do… But this needs a violin crying, crashing breakers, a sweaty blue Arab steed. Ummm… wait. that’s my fantasy!
You do him fake tan and all?
Errr… I was distracted by the horse. But maybe fishnets would help get us past the tan?
Good point lets put him in fishnets!
Sabrina’s had that dream before too…
And that probably just screwed over Ian’s chances. Sabrina seems like the type who likes to be taken by surprise like that
Well if it is the most amazing kiss in the world he could still pull it off.
We’ll see on Monday…!
Sneak Attack! Ian, you don’t waste any time at all….
Sneak attack? How so? He complimented her. she responded. Fair game according the guys rule book. I also think it say if you are on line an a female acknowledges you that means she wants you.
Hmm when you put it like that I guess I get why he did that. I’ve never had the magic touch with guys so I can be clueless to even obvious hints from the opposite sex
In his defense, he feels he’s striking when the iron is hot.
Lol he’s gonna with a bad burn! XD
Okies Albone, I want to see orange marks all over Sabrina’s face and lips on Monday.
LOL, you got it. XD
nothing wrong with ian getting straight to the point, sabrina will probably put-out anyway if the chapter cover means anything.
Hey girls! Don’t let a good guy like this get away.
just thought of something… does this count as “ninja’d!” ? ;P
It does, but I don’t think Sun would approve. XD