Chapter 4-Page-22-Take A Little Ride
Sep07
on September 7, 2012
at 12:02 am
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Unfinished Business
Characters: Black Widow, Sabrina Mancini
Location: Tokyo Dome
Not BFFs, but not bad when you can get a monster like Black Widow to indulge in good sportsmanship. Of course, it’s a different time and a different place. We’ve not heard the last of Black Widow.
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I am going to sound like MGC… but BOOOOO!!!!
In Mo Chen’s wildest nightmares, I would never see Bitsy copping a handshake like that without the PLOWING Sabrina with short-arm clothesline and a stern warning.
lolz Mo Chen..
but in my fanfic..
Mo Chen should be ‘Powergirl’ Katherine Smith and Jennifer Needles friends.. since Katherine and Jennifer are turn face in my fanfic, also Sabrina’s friend..
For you MGC, SMITH & NEEDLES NEEDS TO RETURN BEING HEELS!!!!!!!!!
They are like Babyface Mason Ryan & Babyface JTG, meaning LOW TIER JOBBER, in my eyes! You REALLY need to turn them back to where they belong, HEELS like Evolutions Batista & Randy Orton!
+ I agree with Chen! Widow should have FAKED a handshake, ONLY TO DELIVER A SHORT ARM CLOTHESLINE! This I also shout out BOOO!!!!!
I know Black Widow and she is a decent person deep down and would do something like that.
This is character development! I think that playing Black Widow as a poor sport after every match doesn’t really help anyone.
She’s only lost twice in the history of the comic, bossman. Maybe you are right though. But, I could see her just quietly storming out then having Sabrina stop her and offer the handshake.
This is ….
new.. I say..
here my future thoughts for you Albone
YES!! YES!! YES!!! YES!!! YES!! YES!! YES!! YES!!! YES!!! YES!! YES!! YES!! YES!! YES!!
CHLOE DE SADE BEING FACE!! AND BE SABRINA’S FRIEND!!
YES!! YES!! YES! YES!! YES!!
ALSO ‘POWERGIRL’ KATHERINE SMITH BE SABRINA’S FRIEND
POWERGIRL/ ULTRAGIRL (SUPERHEROINE TEAMUP)
STOP WITH MAKING HELLS BELLS TURN FROM EVOLUTION INTO KAIENTIA MAN!!! They are HEEL and FOREVER WILL BE HEELS!!!
Sometimes I keep thinking to myself that ARE YOU REALLY A HELLS BELLS FOLLOWER, because if you were, you would NEVER BE HAVING THEM AS HEEL!!!!!!!!!
Thats me!
I mean NEVER BE HAVING THEM AS FACE!!!!!!!!!
My anger got the best of me posting this because HELLS BELLS are HEELS! lmao. Dude you are my bro and I love you, BUT STOP MAKING THEM INTO JOBBERS!!!
Albone already said they are and forever will be heels, so NOT GET OFF!! lmao *starts crying inside*
just raising possibilities
if Albone did Katherine, Jennifer and Chloe as face, and also BFF of Sabrina..
I can see them alot..
Win win Win situation..
I got a possibility! Make Hells Bells as a dominate HEEL stable like Evolution was back in the day!
Mad Crumby Guy has trouble understanding how things can work out.
Pet Snowkitten..
lmao I know but rather see them as what the really are….HEELS! MGC just wants them as babyface jobbers so Albone can post them up as much as he does Sabrina. lol
I say skip that and have post MORE RUA! ALL RUA, ALL DAY!!! lol
Win some.. though..
but win win situation on my part as a reader
but they won’t be jobbers..
come on..
‘Powergirl’ Katherine Smith, and ‘Phoenix’ Jennifer Needles.. along with ‘Ultragirl’ Sabrina Mancini.. they’ll be like ;Justice X?;
I AGREE
MORE BRENDA RUA MATCHES!!
BRENDA WINNING MOST OF THE MATCHES
BRENDA SUCCESS DEFENDING HER RIVALANGELS BELT
Rather see Hells Bells become the elite Hell Stable of RA, like The Evolution of RA while DI would be like The Main Event Mafia of RA.
I like how you think 😀
If Black Widow fought Chloe, Black Widow would be the face in that fight. XD
I can see that. Bitsy is more like a Randy Orton than a cowardly sadist like Chloe.
Unexpected… Not sure what to make of it. At least the feud is resolved, though.
Was it a feud? Seemed more like just Black Widow being a bully, but she was a bully to multiple people. We only ever really cared when it happened to the main character.
I agree no feud, just mean and trying to get into her head.
Two post-match attacks, a match call-out, and then a grudge match. It was enough to cause Yvonne Carmichael to invest in protection for Sabrina. May not have been a long feud, but quite a nasty little mini-feud.
I considered it a feud but maybe you prefer ‘program?’ Kind of like a quarter season finale. 😛
I waited to post this comment today since I know it would have been lost with the update.
First: Makes me like BW more. Although it is frightening to think that for those she doesn’t respect gets that type of treatment.
Secondly:
Albonia, your assumptions of me were all wrong. I am not and was not comparing you to WWE, until it wasn’t until recently that the writing for that has gotten better and even then I still find myself changing the channel thanks to the predictability and checking with Bleacher Report later on looking for the remote chance that I was wrong. I don’t even stick around for the main events.
So I’m just going to point this out and tell you that I’m praising you because your writing is better than that despite there being a typical RA fashion.
I might mention how someone reminds me of someone else but I don’t care to compare in such a way because that’s insulting to the writer’s efforts towards originality. Someone makes up something and puts the work and effort into it and all someone can say is how it’s not like the WWE? That’s disrespectful. Not to mention they have a writing team, a whole team, versus one person.
But the way that you brought it up does say something about you and how the WWE seems to be a tender spot especially being compared to it. Is it all of the story and all of WWE or is it just one character?
It might hurt as a writer that I missed Cocoa’s cunning because I mis-interrupted it or there is even the remote chance that as a writer you didn’t make her cunning enough. Yes this sounds mean and harsh but as a writer you have to look at it in that perspective and decide for yourself which way it is. But cunning or no rules were bent the win wasn’t entirely clean. It makes me wonder if it really is impossible nowadays for there to be a decent face vs face match.
Also Sayuki beat Sabrina? Oh I had to look back into the comments to learn that it was something elsewhere. When you sell this book how many other readers will know of this or will they be left to assume? I have no idea where to find the rest of that one. I’m going to assume that was a clean win.
Anyhow, I’m not looking for heroine destruction and I don’t have a fetish for it (one term for it is ryona don’t ask how I know that) although I do love seeing women being tough as nails Akira Hokuto vs Shinobu Kadori match still sends chills down my spine no matter how many times I see it, and it’s not because it’s some woman getting beaten up but because those two put on one hell of a match that’s great be it male or female.
I’m not always sitting here reading these and thinking every match she is in she should lose. I’m just wondering when she will. Rather than say I’m after some fetish I would say that I’m looking for a small touch of realism. You don’t always win, you aren’t always the best. There are miscalculations in a person’s actions, and serious injuries that aren’t caused by others such as landing the wrong way. Or a dui (joking).
There are wins and there are loses and yes it’s great to see the heroin get back up afterwards but when they pop back up within an hour or so of it following the usual tough love pep talk from a friend. You can see so many half hour kids shows that does that and honestly I do believe that you are better than that and can do more than what you are doing should you choose to do so.
I’ve said what I’ve had to say about Sabrina’s character, that hasn’t changed and to repeat it would be a broken record. You don’t understand why I don’t like her and I can’t seem to convey it to you because she is your creation, you have her figured out, you know and understand things about her that I just don’t.
But I get the feeling that even though I say this to be positive you will take all of this in the negative because you’ve established the fact that I’m a critic that you just don’t like because I’ve honestly said what I thought. I’m at peace with that.
Also I’m female although I’m told I have more cojones than some men.
If only there were, like, a forum or something where you could speak at length with Albone in private and hash everything out and such.
Oh well.
OI find the forum here confusing to use.
There is. Look for the green “Forum” button just to the left of the summary (the block that has the link to the comments). Or just goe here: http://rivalangels.freeforums.org/
*pets the kitten’s back* it’s ok. you’ll get it
Maybe sprinkle some catnip on the forum?
Thanks for reading Rival Angels.
OH. MY. GAAWDDDD!
Brina done kicked the hostility right out of Bitsy! See that guy in the first row? He caught a face full of her attitude AND a couple of her teeth! (and the logo on her top, amirite? :D)
Seriously, who is that and what’d she do to BW? Where’d all the hate go? Does this mean she *doesn’t* respect Brenda? And how am I going to get that mental image of Bitsy in Brina’s outfit out of my head? *NNNNNYYYAAAARRGGGHHHbrainbleachbrainbleachbrainbleach*
Meh. Imma going to go back to cheering myself hoarse now.
I know. She’s like the bumble snow monster now.
Better than the Mo Monster
You just don’t know Bitsy. I’ve known her for years and in the lead up to fights she is pure mean. Afterwards she is a good girl.
The prob with BW and me is we’re too often in each other’s way. But the Kitten is right in that Bitsy can be nice to to those who are not a threat. There are people who love her.
Black Widow knows what happens when she attacks opponents after a fight, and she’s grown up a little for it. In fact, her good sportsmanship is going to come back round later. 😉
I can see her making a statement next match though… to prove she’s not ‘gone soft’.
And thus we lose another heel.
Handshakes are the kiss of death for heels, I can’t take them seriously after, it just seems like something that goes completely against being heel.
Well she will more than likely double down on the next person she fights so soon the mean Black Widow will be back.
If you say so.
You can’t be ambushing people after every match, they’ll start to see it coming! Me thinks Black Widow is taking the long view here…
*suspisious eyes*
You are right. I can almost see a rematch and Bitsy going to shake Sabrina’s hand and then hanging on and stomping the snot out of her.
Indeed! XD
For me this seems reminiscent of Undertaker vs Jeff Hardy. Not that Hardy ever won those matches, but giving his all against the much stronger and more experienced opponent did get him some respect.
Now let’s see whom the Black Widow is afraid of….
Snow Kitten’s
I’m not sure she’s *afraid* of anyone. She’s got another very big part to play.
Well, by definition any part she played…
True, Bitsy lives large. Another time or place and she might do Falstaff
Widow forgot to clothesline her after the handshake, that’s all. It happens.
LOLZ
Yay fOr Sabrina to earn Black Widow’s support. 😀
Maybe now things will go well for Sabrina.
You might be right! Things are looking up for Sabrina. And what goes up…
I shall fantasize till then.
Stay classy, BW.
I miss the other Upstarts–I hope we get to check in with them sometime soon!
Other Upstarts? How about next chapter?
dreams do come true!
w00t!
Hey, some people might not like it, but sometimes the best way to earn someone’s respect is to go int there, give it 100%, and kick their ass a little. Why do you think Brenda and I get along so well?
Huh? Because I kick your ass?
Because we kick each other’s asses, champ.
*coughcoughcoveringlaughtercough*
Your scrawny ass has something it wants to say? I’ve stepped in the ring with some of the best that they have to offer and haven’t taken a single step backwards. You, on the other hand, I haven’t seen step in the ring once.
Well I suppose that if you haven’t seen it, it must not have happened. *guffaw*
Like the old saying goes, believe only half of what you see and none of what you hear. And that’s all I seem to be doing from you, hearing you run your mouth. You want to prove your point (and I’m not talking the one on your head) why not step between the ropes and take me on?
I care not a whit for your doubts. I prove the point every time I do step between the ropes to any who happen to see. If you haven’t been privileged to see, you have my pity.
Not so much pity, however, that I need to sully myself. You aren’t equipped to be an opponent of mine, and I am not referring to what’s in your trunks. Jog on, lad.
So what you’re saying is, you’re so full of your own hype that you don’t wanna run the risk of possibly losing since it’d be a crippling blow to your ego…. I get it
If you wish to believe that, you’re welcome to.
Same way you’re welcome to beileive “I’m not worth it”
Ah, but I HAVE seen you wrestle, (I’ll be kind and not use scare quotes.) Twice, in fact. And even if I’m only to believe one of those, per your maxim, I’ve still got enough data to satisfy myself on that regard.
All I know is, when someone turns down a challange, it’s usually not because they’re worried they might win
Is that indeed all you know? Somehow I find that unsurprising.
Darling, you’re going to be unplesantly surprised
Y’know, Donny, I can understand why Brenda would have to fight Callie. Contract obligations and all. But you, volunteering… slumming it a bit, aren’t you?
Classic really. How many opponents fight each other only to come out as friends afterwards. Kind of like what happened in the Rookie Fatal Four way so many moons ago.
But look how that ended. when there are 4 friends in the same competitive work enviroment and one is elevated and labeled “special” it causes fractures in the friendship. the other 3 are left to fend for themselves, to work harder to get noticed while the special one has management do that for her.
They realize they are not equals.
By the same token, which one of the four had their hand slammed in a dumpster door? Moving up the ladder might mean more money and fame, but it’s not any easier.
Poor Brenda would be fairly safe* from interlopers like me if it weren’t for that belt. 😀
(*Well no, I’d still kick her arse and enjoy doing it, but it’d be a hobby rather than a profession)
Sabrina was just starting out and she’s just as protected as Brenda.
Ultragirl is attacked, YOUR FIRED/SUSPENDED.
Monica sent to the hospital, WHO CARES?
that’s because Gabby sees big money in ensuring Brina stays active and healthy- blond goody all american girl babyfaces are almost always pushed heavily (see Kelly Kelly who somehow remains popular with the fans despite limited talent IMO). Don;t forget brina’s the only one who got an RA mentor (Marina) to help ensure Brina gets on the fast track to the top.
Monica’s probably making close to minimum RA wage and short punching bags aren’t that hard to come by in Gabby’s eyes so if Monica’s out for any length of time not many are going to notice- but lots of folk will want to see the Belles get beat up and will pay for the chance to watch that so they stay. Until they tried ending brina’s career that is.
Brina> Belles>Monica in gabby’s eyes so she reacts accordingly. Notice how no one in BRA was trying to fine/suspend BW during her path of destruction pre-Brina. also Brenda>BW in Gabby’s RA so BW got the boot.
I can see BW doing this with Brina. But there has to be a rematch and I’ve no doubt she’ll return to form.
Speaking of form, BW could get Brina’s outfit on so there’s no real worries there.
A rematch you think? I think BRA would have to up the stakes in that fight. I mean, Black Widow doesn’t fight just anyone. Hmmm, that reminds me that BRA doesn’t have a world title yet.
Perks up at the word “title.”
Rococo should challenge Rua for her title, maybe enter RA as a female Del Rio since she focuses on the arms like he does. lol
Hmmmm, that is interesting…
Hmmm, I guess you were right, Alan. She’s going to have drinks instead of punches to the face. Teach me to try to guess what the writer’s cooking. 😛
Writers. Go fig. 😀
Scribhneoiri go brath
Drinks can feel like punches to face, depending on how many drinks there are.
Or the way you make them. Yes, you! xD
<_<
Or what you’re drinking. Some of that college swill people keep trying to convince me is “still good enough to drink” just hits me like a ton of bricks.
Damnit! Now I’m picturing a Tsundere Black Widow! This is so wrong!
Nice to see, but now I have this image in my head and it won’t go away!
“S-Shutup Sabrina! I’m not taking out (Insert adversary here) for your sake. I just gotta score to settle!”
My, well I’m extremely surprised at BW’s reaction. Interesting.
Knew Black widow congrats Sabrina, what a great win for her.