Chapter 5-Page-16-Victory is Fleeting
An exhibition match that ends cordially, but with the new arrivals, that civility might be gone in an instant.
In panel 2, Sabrina is of course referencing her triple threat match with Callie and Samantha. 😉
Comic and Story
I don’t mind telling you that I had a hard time with the finish of this match and I had actually wrote FOUR different finishes with each lady winning. It’s one of the few times where I went and canvassed opinions from my friends, wrestling fans and not and listened to the common concerns, which of course you’ll find out as the rest of this drama unfolds. 😉
Call for Fan Arts!
At the end of this month Rival Angels will be taking a break until the new year. I have some posts prepped of some work I’ve been doing, commissions and even some guest posts. I thought I would share the fun with you too and express some of your favorite angels! Anyone can play and you can pick any of your favorite Rival Angels characters. Just send in Rival Angels art, cosplay, photo-manips, fan fiction (please keep to a page or two), songs, etc., to archangel[at]rivalangels.com or my DeviantArt account and I’ll post them over the break. Please have all submissions in by Monday, November 29th.
Voting Incentive!
It seems that Sabrina is less than thrilled with the new arrivals. Vote to see what’s coming up on Wednesday!
Bollocks.
Well, at least it isn’t what you’d call a decisive victory for ‘Brina.
Only sort of win she was going to get against ME…
So thye way got out of there makes me wonder if you have set her up to get hurt for winning.
Pfft. I might not hang around to deal with whoever it is has a gripe with blondie, but I didn’t set up anything. 😛
True dat, at least that’s how I interrupted things from what I’ve read from your matches.
And thanks for being such a good sport! Honestly, I had 4 different endings to this (I rewrote you winning TWICE) and eventually I went with the one that made best sense to the story, for this chapter and long term.
Hehehe, I won’t pretend I wasn’t rooting for me, (that does sound odd…) but it’s your comic, Sabrina’s the protagonist, and hey, it’s wrestling! 😀
(Though ya coulda been fair and showed the pre-match attack on me by four girls with kendo sticks that made it possible for….oh all right, fine, she won fair and square! hmmph)
XD
The eventual thinking was that, even though the first match you had with Sabrina was in a panel and on the forum, to lose a second time and then get beat down after the match would make her look weak. Obviously, the torture porn folks would eat it up, but that’s not the story I’m trying to tell. Of course, the next meeting in Sabrina/Callie…who knows? And if it’s any consolation I had you initially going over. XD Your forum stuff is fantastic.
Then I shall take it as a compliment (in addition to your specific compliment) that you enjoy my works so much that you considered overturning a plot element in your story to favour me, even if you ultimately returned to the little blonde tart once again. 😀
I dunno’… that shoulder coulda’ been up.
🙂
It definitely was SUPER close. 😉
Aw man. The post match ambush. Really? REALLY?
Sigh. Well, it *probably* ain’t Bitsy again.
Well it isn’t “just” her, at any rate. “That lot” is plural. 😉
It IS more than one. Someone new looking to make a name, or an old grudge resurfaced?
Again? Really? I think Sabrina needs to be less bushy.
Not sure if its Bitsy… would she bring backup? Not her style.
’tis true…*I’ve* never known Bitsy to need any backup. Hell, I’ve seen her take on two opponents….!
Nice ending to the match and I love the professionalism of Brina and Callie. Also, nice cliffhanger…what the hey.
I just hope that that legs we are looking at are in pants and not that hairy. Is that you MGC?
Thanks! It didn’t seem right that Callie and Sabrina would have any sort of blood feud, especially with what’s been written on the forums…not to mention their rivalry is now knotted at 1-1. 😉
What does Sabrina means
“Brenda almost beat Blackwidow”?
does that mean.. Brenda loss to Black Widow?
She’s talking crazy. Brenda and hurricanranas go together like pralines and arse.
You’re welcome to that dish hun. Too kinky for me.
YAY Champ!!
Means that Brenda almost got a three against Widow with that move but didn’t, and then beat her with something else later on.
The Black Widow is tough and sometimes wins against Brenda. No wrestler is perfect…well ‘cept me.
I think it was a jab at Rua like Sabrina finished Callie with a hurracanrana and not a finisher while Rua couldn’t and used her finisher.
HEEL SABRINA SLOWLY SHOWING!!! lol joking…. maybe! lol
Oh great, sabrina’s comparing herself to Brenda. Im not surprised that superstar treatment from day one has given her a huge head if she thinks she’s at that level.
Don’t all the newbies have the Ancient Masters to look up to as role models and hope they can be half as good?
I guess Sabrina is slowly believing the hype of her being The Ryback or Cena to Rua’s Cena or Rock. She needs to be taken down a peg, so these two UNKNOWN visitors will show her that she is wrong. *evil laughter*
Say what? HEY!!
So many words were emphasized this time. I started rearranging trying to see if they would form a sentence or a secret message for some reason, I always to that whenever I see a lot of emphasizing on one page.
First the Bible code now the Albone wrestling code. I ran it through my computer and it predicted the winner of the American elections tomorrow….The People, Thank Kitten it is almost over.
LOL! Part of the emphasizing was bolding people’s names. More of that next update. 😉
So this is the warm up to the main event ?
Still I wonder what made Sabrina surprised so bad ?
Warm-up? *walks off in a huff*
What he said 😉
No dates from Callie for you after that comment.
I am thinking Sabrina is so suprised because those legs look hairy!
Unfortunately, the BRA ladies usually start within the first hour of the show and there isn’t any other ladies matches on the card. 🙁
She beat Brenda’s last PPV opponent the day (or so) before, and today, as much as it galls me to say it, she beat someone who runs about 50/50 on Brenda in past matches.
YAY!!
*Happy Dance! Happy Dance! I lurve a Happy Dance!*
Oh…
Wait…
What’s happening over there…?
Have you been watching me dance again?
I make Snoopy’s happy dance look sad.
I knew you were double invested in this match. 😉 Yeah, just what IS going on over there?
I don’t know! TALL PEOPLE are in the way!!
*wiggle, nudge, elbow*
XD
Ow! Quit elbowing me, peanut!
Quit being in the way, stringbean!
I was in the match, ya silly git! I’m SUPPOSED to be in the ring!
Do I need to give you another kudo driver?
Starts the clap/chat *This is awe-some!*
I don’t know why?
if Sabrina beat them.. the opponent became friends with Sabrina this..
Blackwidow, then Callie..
so when will CHloe be Sabrina’s friend..
‘STORY GLITCH’
Brina didn;t go for the “friendship” option when it came time to “FINISH HER!” in their match. that’s why <nods>
thinking on making Sabrina suffer a Mortal KOmbat style..
since you introduce it
Some people just know how to make friends, others don’t.
Oi! Just because I didn’t pound her into the canvas out of frustration, doesn’t mean I’m friends with the little tart all of a sudden…
Yep! Just something I picked up from your stories on the forum.
Oh yeah, I’m not usually one for that sort of “instant rematch” nonsense. Want revenge? Get it the next go-round. Meanwhile, no one’s paying me extra for that, so it’s back to the showers.
Especially when we find out who it is. Everyone steers clear of *them.*
CHLOE IS A BITCH MAN, STOP HAVING DREAMS OF A GOOD CHLOE CAUSE THAT WILL NEVER HAPPEN! Chloe is Crullea De Vile, so no face for her.
STILL PISSED OF WIDOW DOING THAT, no she is like the current Abyss instead of how Abyss just to be.
Beating on someone after a match (loss) is just immature.
But beating on them after a match you win is fun for the whole family!
…what?
it is hard to run right ego level. To little she is a whimp to much she gloats. I think she is a good person who gets a lot of abuse.
. Just send in Rival Angels art, cosplay, photo-manips, fan fiction (please keep to a page or two), songs, etc., to
what do you mean songs?
is parody lyrics okay? coz I’m currently making?
Parody lyrics are fine as long as it’s Rival Angels and not torture porn or heroine destruction.
Seems the visual of Brina’s awesome springboard Dragon-rana was enough to keep Callie stunned for three seconds. Nothing to be ashamed about, sometimes when the opponent is really tough, you need to blind them a bit with some incredble. I call it a “Fireworks offense” because you do something that looks cool, and you’re opponent is too busy going “ooooh. aaaaah.” to counter
LOL! That’s what it comes down to, the three seconds. Sometimes it’s a fast three and sometimes it’s a slow three. 😛
Wasn’t this the same ref who bollocks-ed things up in the match between Sabrina and Cocoa? Obviously trying to make amends with that quick count…
always be wary of hasty exits
Yeah, nothing good comes of it. O_o
No haste whatsoever!
Merely prudent alacrity.
It’s Vincent! His stalker tendencies have surfaced, and the only thing he hates more than not having Sabrina for a girlfriend is a fair fight (he’s a ref, after all).
Man, you really DO know Vincent and he IS expected to make a comeback in a big way. This could definitely be it.
Yeah, one of these days, my frenzied claims of “It’s VINCENT!” will be right ^.^
I guarantee it. XD
so my comment was deleted hmmm?
Yeah, first one.
https://www.RivalAngels.com/comic/chapter-5-page-14-argy-bargy
Check’s in the mail ladies. And I’ll replace that busted stick too.
And Callie the next crane you see will be at the end of my perfect toes – crane stance snap facial. No charge.
Wonderful art and and surprise ending. Good job all around.
Pffft. You couldn’t kick that high even if you really WERE ten stone…
Thanks, Champ! 🙂
Ohh with the pretty polish you wore in our Best Legs Battle?
Hokay… you got me. This is Mo Chen’s heel turn. Me and Loretta Diaz hop a flight to Japan. I owe Diaz a favor an’ she wants to give Sabrina an ass kicking.
Sure, just let the cat out of the bag. XD
I’m pretty sure no good can come from the next page…Well for Sabrina anyways. lol
I think you’re on to something there. 😉