Page 213 – Atomic Fission
We’re moving a bit quicker now. Getting into the good stuff like seeing some of that Sun ‘tude we’ve come to know and love peeking out. Plus, the very first time she does the ‘Atomic Fission‘ aka the Shooting Star Elbow Drop. THE signature move of Cannonball Kyle Pallas. Oh yeah, I guess Sun still have some of that schoolgirl crush in her for her teacher. 😉
Monday will be a fun update. We’ll get to see just what goes into making a good ring persona. Expect more panels than normal and more laughs.
Last night I was a guest on TGT Webcomics. We talked about webcomics, what goes into making them and what some of my favorites are. We also talked a little wrestling and what some of the inspirations were for some of the Angels. You can get it at iTunes or by going here
Well, the transition was just too abrupt on this one. We go from Sun out in the cold on the pro’s doorstep to one year later, when she’s executing a difficult move off the top rope.  Shouldn’t we have seen some in-between stuff, for cryin’ out loud? I would’ve wanted to!
ah? 1 year later?
I wonder what happen in the morning. Sun slept outside the Wrath and Body work? did Kyle kicked Sun or something? and since Sun left Auburn Hills, does it means that she’s not staying in her house anymore? Did Sun’s Mom abandon Sun already?, Who supports Sun to pay her trainers? Does she still works on the Choco-dip?
Kirikirimai (Mind boggling)
Panel 1: I really like Panel 1.. I hope we can see those kinda of art when Sun hits the Atomic Fusion (Shuriken Elbow), or maybe a huge page of Atomic Fusion.. ehhehehÂ
here’s one Q.
In her Rival Angels wrestling gear, why is it Green and White combination. it’s nice to see her with Red wrestling gear though, I hope we can see some gear change heheheh..
Peace!
Well, that’s one way to break your ribs…Â So, does she get her pilot’s license now?
I like that page, even if the transition is a bit too fast for me too. And like MGC said, i like Sun in Red, i even prefer that gear on the others she have presently. Could you make a gear change with sun?  Maybe she could change her gear for some reason and get a red one, with something writing on it. ^^
I love Sun expression in panel 3, she seem happy and also to love him. 🙂
Ahh yes, tremble in fear at the rising of the Red Sun!
….someone had to make the joke.
Great comic there Al. But I looked at the top and saw 1 year later and was all: Huh? What now?. Also, I don’t think the crush for teacher is going to end up well for Sun… She’s going to get her heart crushed somehow…
The transition was abrupt to write as well, but in the interest of space restrictions I found myself having to encapsulate six years in eleven pages. While it would have been great to see every step of Sun’s journey, I knew that most of the readers have at least a passing familiarity with what Sun *would* have been doing in that year.
Thanks for sticking with the story, peeps.
Hey Darkmark! We’re going after the high notes of Sun’s origin as it pertains to what we’ve seen and what’s coming up in the future. I do appreciate that you want more of Sun’s story! If possible, I think we’ll revisit it again because there are some good parts that we have to skip in order to tell the story. I think too, once you’re able to read the whole origin in one sitting as opposed to three times a week, it will read a bit smoother and rewarding.
MGC, I think the answer to your first flurry of questions is, ‘no.’ 😛 The Atomic Fission is a crowd pleaser and look! she pulled it off! Sun’s outfit in the story reflects her lack of a ‘look’ or gimmick, but that’s cool that you like the different look. Green and grey seemed like a good Dragon color combination.
GhostEraser, the license is in the mail.
Hey Svan, another call for gear change? Possibly, if it were to happen it would probably reflect a change in her attitude or a change in her outlook. Glad you liked panel 3! It’s a softer side of Sun. 😀
*groan* Cookie Ogre. LOL Actually, that’s not so bad. *swipe*
Hey Kurt! You’ll definitely want to stay tuned for the further developments between Sun and Kyle. 😉
Right-O, Justin!
The transition was a little jarring. I’d expected to see at least a montage, but the explanation of her injuries gives a good idea of how that went. Though with that many injuries, I do have to wonder how she found time to hone her skills, particularly with the broken ankles. You can still do hindu squats and run the ropes with a broken wrist or concussion, but you can’t do much at all athletically with a broken wheel.
This all does seem to tell me that Sun is a ‘natural’ and has been honing the talent she has. I strongly suspect that she’s going to be in a rude awakening when she goes to the next level.
It also seems that Kyle’s got a bit of affection back toward Sun, by the way he’s playing with her hair in Panel 3. I hope he’s not been too lenient on her.
You know, it took me a moment to realize that panel 3 was her fantasizing again. Thought she was about to demonstrate the feudal Japanese sensei-student relationship. :) Sun is easily my favorite character.
Gotta say, the shooting star elbow is another new move for me. But as these guys said, it’s not the passage of time that is jarring, it’s that the last comic felt like it had a cliffhanger, and that you skipped the resolution to that.
I realy love that page, i would like more of sun story inthe furur. Like Svan and MGC i prefer Sun in Red. Maybe a red gear with gold band strip like Lacey could be very cool, with a Gold dragon on the side of her leg. ^^
Oh and that move is awesome 😛
Hey Zodo! I probably wasn’t as clear as I could’ve been with panel 3….it’s a daydream panel for Sun, like a few pages ago when Sun was daydreaming at the Choco-Dip. Everything else you got, spot on though. Sun IS a natural and exceptional, which is why she gets the love that she does.
tcorbett, glad you got panel 3. XD Sun still has her crush here, but will she have it in the present time? Hmmmmm….
Ken, glad you liked the Shooting Star Elbow Drop! It’s a wicked finisher. Unfortunately, no one has done it so there aren’t any YouTube clips on it yet.
Hey Vanessa! I’m glad you loved the page. I think more Sun origin in the future is a safe bet. Another vote for Sun in red gear, eh? Glad you like the move, Kyle likes it too but he got a bit too much of it though. He DID ask for it though. 😛
i really like this Comic, and I think this was a perfect time for the Sun Story. The art does a good job of showing Sun in her different moods and emotions. I’m looking forward to the new weeks pages. Sun was so cute a few pages ago when she was babbling with Kyle. I wonder what will happen that makes Sun go Dirty in contrast to how Sabrina is Pure Baby Face. Also thanks for the tip on Johnny Saturn. Very good Job! Thank You!
I think the transition was perfect. I didn’t miss Kyle Pallas stroking her hair fondly either. Nice work again.
Hey Rorschach! Â I think you’ll like this week’s pages. 😉 Â I’m thrilled that your enjoying the pages and story. Â And yeah, Johnny Saturn is a great read. Â Thanks again for the kind words.
Ahh, the near duplication of Kyle’s dialog made me think it might have been a daydream, but I wasn’t sure. Perhaps if you’d bordered that panel as a thought bubble, originating from Sun’s head in the next panel it might have been more obvious.